
Writing Letters
I finished writing letters to my mother and my father. I printed the letters, and some sentences were written by hand. I hoped they might improve my father’s life (although I do not have big expectations). I visited the bar Nagomi, and then I visited the bar Naoki for the first time in two months, because I had met the owner, Naoki, at the convenience store the previous night. I did not enjoy it very much. I thought that you should not commit to doing things out of a sense of obligation. Therefore, I moved to the bar Ajia-tei. I met Nakashima-san, whom I had met at the bar Kitaro the previous night. He was working there part-time. I bought beers for him and the bar owner. The owner introduced my small book to Nakashima-san. We talked, and the bar owner said if the book sold, he would give me a beer. That was a good deal. I left around midnight and fell asleep just after 2 am.
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- Writing Letters I finished letters to my mother and my father. I printed letters and some sentences were writtin by handwrinting. I hope it would improved my father's life (Actually, I do not have big expectation.) I visited the bar Nagomi, and then I visited the bar Naoki for the first time since two months. Because, I met the bar owner Naoki at the convenience store the previous night. I do not enjoy there very much. I thought that you should not commit to do thing from your compulsory or bligation feeling. Therefore; I moved to the bar Ajia-tei. I met Nakashima-san who I met the bar Kitaro the previous night. He worked as a part-time worker. I gave beer to him and the bar owner. He introduced my small book to Nakashima-san. We talked if the book sold, he would give me a beer. That is good deal. I left there around midnight and I fell asleep just after 2 am.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.