
Watching a Movie: Wicker
I had oatmeal for breakfast. It was a very healthy meal. I went to the movie theater and watched a movie called Wicker. It was not so bad; however, I could hardly understand any of the dialogue. How poor my language skills are! After that, I went to Vlaar bar. I had two different types of beer. I was able to enjoy some quiet time. For dinner, I cooked sliced potatoes and celery with an egg and some other things. I had a fairly quiet evening. While having dinner, I listened to Crime and Punishment. I was astonished by how similar Raskolnikov’s reasoning was to the way some young people today think about elderly people. He believed that an old woman who lent money should die. It reminded me of the attitudes some young people have towards older generations.
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- Watching A Movie: Wicker I had oatmeal for breakfast. It was super healthy one. I visited a movie theater and watched called Wicker. It was not so bad, however, I could not understand almost all conversation. How poor my language skill. After that, I went to the bar Vlaar. I had two types of beer. I was able to spent quiet time. For dinner, I cooked sliced potato and cerely with an egg and so forth. I spent a moderate night this day. During having dinner, I heard Crime and Punishment. I astonished how same logic has Lascorinicof why he think a debt elder woman should die. It is the same as the current young people opinion for elder people.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.




