
Family Gathering
My sister’s family gathered at my parents’ house. There were 8 or 9 people. We started eating and drinking at noon. We had sushi, roasted duck, which my sister Nina cooked, pizza, and so on. I tried to keep my drinking pace lower than usual. In the evening, I went shopping by myself. On the way there, I met Inoue-san. He said he would pick up a yakiniku combo for his wife’s birthday. I congratulated him. Around 6:30 pm, we had dinner. After dinner, we set off fireworks in the yard and played card games and board games. We talked and laughed a lot throughout the day. That night, my mom told me that one of the toilets was clogged, so we should use the second-floor toilet instead. It was next to my room, so I felt a bit uncomfortable. I fell asleep around 11:30 pm.
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- Relatives Gathering My sisters family were gathering at my parents house. There were 8 or 9 people. We started eating and drinking at noon. We had sushi, kamo rose which my sister Nina cooked, pizza and sof forth. I tried to keep a drinking speed in lower than usual. In the evening, I went to a shopping by myself. On the way there, I met Inoue-san. He said he will pick yakiniku combo for his wife's birth day. I said congratulations. Around 6:30 pm, we had dinner. After dinner, we did fireworks at the yard and did card game and board game. We talked and laughed a lot for a whole day. In the night, my mom told me that one of the toilet was spoiled so we should use second floor's toilet instead. It was located next to my room so I felt a bit umcomfortable. I fell asleep around 23:30 pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.




