
A Visit to a Public Bath
It has been extremely hot every day in Japan. In the evening, I went to a public bath called Hono-yu. I washed my entire body for the first time in about a year. I took a short nap there. I went to the bar Takomon. I realized how ridiculously cheap that bar was. I stopped by a supermarket and bought some discounted food. Those prices gave me the impression that I was in heaven. I had dinner at home. My mom prepared Hiroshima’s famous Japanese anchovy sashimi. My dad watched TV, my mom watched TV in another room, and I read a book while having dinner. We did not talk to each other. I fell asleep around 11 pm. It was not a special day. In fact, it was rather boring.
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- Going To A Public Bath It is continued crazy hot day in Japan. In the evening, I went to the a public bath called Hono-yu. I washed my entire body for the first time since about a year. I took short nap their. I went to the bar Takomon. I confirmed how redicurously cheap that bar. I stopped a supermarket and got some discounted food. Those price gave me an impression types of heaven. I had dinner at home. My mom prepared Koiwashi sashimi. My dad watched TV, and my mom watched TV another room, and I read a book while having dinner. We had discommunication. I fell asleep around after 11 pm. It was not a special day, furthermore boring.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.




