
Bar Hopping
I was able to return to my normal condition and completed my daily routine properly. In the afternoon, it started raining, but it stopped soon. In the evening, I went to the bar Vlaar. I had bread, cheese, a boiled egg, and some other snacks for dinner. After dinner, I went out again and visited the bar My Way. I did not know why I wanted to go out again. I met Louis. It was rare to see him at that bar because Stiefel is his regular bar. He was in a good mood, and we talked for a while. Ruud said that he was completely drunk. I also met a new customer, Sjark. We talked, and he bought me a beer. Interestingly, the bar owner, Rob, also bought me a beer. It turned into a fun and enjoyable night. However, while I was drinking, I felt empty and lonely, so I cried a little and tried to hide my tears. I dove into bed around midnight.
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- Bar Hopping I was able to came back my normal condition and did daily routine properly. Afternoon, it started raining but it stopped soon. In the evning, I went to the bar Vlaar. I had bread, cheese, a boiled egg and so on for dinner. After having dinner, I went out again and visite the bar My Way. I did not know why I wanted to go out again. I met Louis. It was rare case to see at the bar because his regular bar is Stiefel. He is in a good mood and we talked something. Ruud said he is drunk completely. I met new customer Sjark. We talked and he gave me a beer. Interestingly, the bar owner Rob gave me a beer. It turned fun and joyful night. However, when I was drinking, I felt empty and lonliness so I cried a bit and tried to hide my tear. I dove into bed around midnight.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.




