A Suddenly Hot Day

It suddenly became much hotter than the previous day. The heat made my room uncomfortable. I handled financial assets for the whole day, and it made me depressed. I went to the bar Vlaar. It was hot even while staying inside. I do not like summer, especially in Europe, because many places do not have air conditioning. I had bread and discounted pork hamburgers with plenty of paprika for dinner. Even while having dinner, the room was still hot. I prefer winter, and I miss it. Around midnight, I came up with an idea to prepare money, so I sat at the table and made a strategy.

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A Hot Day It was being hotter than previos day suddenly. This situation is uncomfortable to my room. I handled finacial assets for a whole day. It made me depressed. I went to the bar Vlaar. It was hot even though staying inside. I do not like summer especially staying in Europe because they have no air conditioner. I had bread and discounted pork hanburger with plenty of paprika for dinner. While having dinner, the room was still hot. I prefer winter and I miss winter. In the midnight, I got an idea to prepare money so I made strategy sitting on the table.
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Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.

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