
Writing a Letter
In the morning, I visited a farmers market and bought bread, cheese, and ginger for about €15. I wrote a letter to Maria, the owner of the bar Stiefel, because I wanted to express my appreciation. It turned into quite a long letter. In the evening, I visited the bar Stiefel and fortunately Maria was there, so I handed the letter to her. I wondered whether she would be happy with it. I watched figure skating at the Winter Olympic Games. The gold medal winner was a Dutch woman. She cried a little and it gave me a sentimental feeling, so I also cried a little. When I came back home, a housemate was cooking, so I cooked in my room. I steamed white fish fillet and vegetables wrapped in aluminum foil. The bread that contained olives tasted good. Eventually, I drank a whole bottle of white wine. It seemed that I was in a good mood. I fell asleep just after 10 pm.
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- Writing A Letter In the morning, I visited a farmers market. I got bread, cheese, and ginger. I spent about €15. I wrote a letter the bar Stiefel's owner Maria because I wanted express my appreciation. It was turned in a quite long lette. In the evening, I visite the bar Stiefel. Fortunately, Maria was there. I passed the letter to her. I expected if she was happy with the letter. I watched a figure skating in Winter Olympic Game. The winner for gold medal was a Dutch woman. She cried a bit and it gave me sentimental feeling so I cried a bit also. When I came back home, a sharemate was cooking so I cooked in my room. I steamed an alminum paper wrapped white fish fillet and vegetabls. The bread which was contained olive was good taste. Eventually, I drunk up a whole bottle of white wine. It seemed I was in a good mood. I fell asleep around just after 10 pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.




