
Going to the Movies Two Days in a Row
I went to the movie theater two days in a row. I watched Brokeback Mountain, which was a homosexual story. Honestly, it gave me an uncomfortable feeling, but it was interesting enough. After that, I visited the bar My Way. It was packed. There were no seats, and Peter, a lonely middle aged man, was there. He usually smells bad, so I left earlier than usual. Also, there was a ridiculous dog running inside the bar. I have to say, go away to outer space. When I was cooking at home, I met my sharemate boyfriend. I thought he was different from the one I met before. Has she changed her boyfriend? Anyway, I do not like such a guest, so I felt uncomfortable. I had stir fried pork with vegetables, and mushroom oil spaghetti for dinner. I felt irritated and miserable because Eri did not say anything about our promise on Valentine Day. Is she okay? I know it is her usual behavior. I fell asleep around 10 pm.
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- Go To Movie, In A Row I went to a movie thater two days in a row. I watched Brokeback Mountain which was homo secsual story. Actually, I felt bad feelings but interesting enough. After that, I visited the bar My Way. It was packed. There were no seats so Peter (lonely middlle aged guy). His smelled bad normally so I left there than usual. Also, there was an bullshit dog and it runs inside the bar. I have to say, go away to outer space. When I was cooking at the home, I met sharemate's boyfriend. I thought he is different who I met before. Is she cahnged boyfriend? Anyway, I do not like such a guest so I felt umconfortable. I had stir-fried pork with vegetables, and I had mushroom oil spaghetti for dinner. I irritated and miserable because Eri did not report about our promise on the Valentine day. Is she okay? I know it is her normal behavior, but. I fell asleep around 10 pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.




