A Great Movie
I had breakfast at the hotel. It was a typical Dutch breakfast. I have been wondering why Dutch breakfasts never include soup. I checked out at 11 am, but I did some work in the hotel dining area. I felt a stomachache coming, so I ran into the restroom. I thought it was caused by the milk. It was the first time in three or four months that I had drunk milk. I stopped by an art gallery; it was not bad. Then I took a bus to Alkmaar and visited Filmhuis Alkmaar. I watched We Need to Talk About Kevin. I was astonished that such a talented director exists in the world. Every scene looked like a solid painting, and the story was fantastic. I want to show my deepest respect to Lynne Ramsay. After that, I went to the bar Skip. The owner remembered me and my girlfriend. I wanted to stay longer, but my stomach pain became severe, so I went home. I cooked oil-mushroom spaghetti for dinner and fell asleep around 9 pm.
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- A Great Movie I had breakfast at the hotel. It was normal Dutch breakfast. I have been think why Dutch breakfast does not have any soups? I checked out of the at 11 am but I did some work at the dining insided of the hotel. I felt stomach ache so I run into a restroom. I though this cause from milk? I have not drink milk for the first time since three or four months. I stopped by an art gallery. It was not so bad. I moved to Alkmaar by bus and visited Filmhouse Alkmaar. I watched We Need to Talk about Kevin. I astonished such a great talented director existing in the world. Every scene was being a solid picture and story was fantastic. I want to give big respect for Lynne Ramsay. After that, I visited the bar Skip. The bar owner was remembered me and my girlfriend also. I wanted to stay there longer but I felt severe stomach pain so I got home. I cooked oil mushroom spaghtti for dinner. I fell asleep around 9 pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
