All-Night Drinking
I had a nice breakfast at the hotel. I said goodbye to Eri in the hotel room just before 11 am, and then I also checked out. I did my daily routine in the hotel lobby. I picked up a movie ticket and went to Inokuchi Cinema 109. I watched Kokuho, which has a good reputation, but I did not enjoy it very much. Furthermore, the young students sitting behind me were really noisy. They giggled at random scenes in the movie. It irritated me. I visited the bar Torisen—it was my second time there. I met the bar owner’s partner, a woman who works at a school for people with disabilities. She used to work as a designer, and our conversation got lively. I also met a man named Kusaka-san. He is not a smart guy, but his life is interesting. He once encountered a severe motorcycle accident and suffered serious burns. His tattoo was burned in the exact shape of the original snake design. I took the tram back to my nearest station and went to the bar Ajia-tei. The bar owner sat down next to me and we talked endlessly. Time flew, and we ended up drinking until after 5 am. It was an unbelievable night! I went to bed just before 6 am.
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- All Night Long Drinking I had nice brekfast at the hotel. I said good bye Eri at the hotel room jsut before 11 am and then I also checked out of the hotel. I did daily routine at the looby of the hotel. I took a movie ticket and I moved to Inokuchi Cinema 109. I watched Kokuho which has good reputation but I did not enjoyed it very much. Furthermore, the behind of my seat's young students were really noisy. They giggled at a random scene in a movie. It made me irritating. I visited the bar Torisen. It was my second time there. I met the bar owner's partner woman. She worked at challenged people school. She used to work as as a designer and our conversation got lively. I met another man Kusaka-san. He is not a smart guy but his life is interesting. He encounterd severe bike acciedent and he got serious burn. His tatoo was burned as the shape as snake tatoo. I came back to my nearest station by tram and I went to the bar Ajia-tei. The bar owner sat down next to me and we talked endlessly. Time flies and then we drank after 5 am. It was unbelivable time! I went to bed just before 6 am.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
