
Taking an English Lesson Together
I left my sister’s house around 2:30 pm and we took an Uber to the Oriental Hotel. Eri and I attended my English class together. It was a fascinating experience. We talked about an American teacher who is quite shy and not really suited to teaching. After the lesson, we visited the bar Hebere-ke and had Koune Hiroshima beef tataki. Then we went to another bar, possibly Italian, where we had some foreign beers. Finally, we visited the yakitori bar Carp-dori. Eri loved the bar’s style and atmosphere. We went to bed around midnight.
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- Taking An English Lesson Together I left my sister's house around 2:30 pm and then we moved to Oriental Hotel by Uber. Eri and I went to my English class together. It was fascinating time. We talked about an American teacher. He is quite shy and he is not fit the job of teacher. After taking the lesson, we visited the bar Hebereke. We had Koune Hiroshima beef tataki. We went to another Italian? bar. We had some foreign beers. Last, we visited the yakitori bar Carp-dori. Eri loved the bar's style and atmosphere. We went to bed around midnight.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.