
Thinking New Theme
I wanted to wake up early but I felt sluggish. I noticed that my housemate had gone out early in the morning, so he would probably come back around 1 pm. Therefore, I wanted to go out before he came back. I quickly did the laundry and my daily routine. It was a sunny day. I visited the library. I read books in the restroom for a while. The restroom is the best place for reading. I started to write a new blog article about desire for material things. I could not finish the article. I thought that I needed more time and reflection. I went to the bar My Way. I realized that there was a new bartender, but it turned out she had just changed her hairstyle and gotten a perm. I knew her. Errol gave me a beer. I did not feel well, so I returned home earlier than usual. I cooked a beef steak and had leftover cream spaghetti without heating it up for dinner. I went to bed around 9:30 pm.
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- Thinking New Theme I wanted to wake up early but I felt sluggish. I recognized that my sharemate went out in the early morning so he will come back around 1 pm. Therefore; I wanted to go out before he come back. I quickly did the laundry and my daily routine. It was the sunny day. I visited the library. I read books in a restroom for a while. The restroom is the best place for reading. I started to write a new blog article about desire for material things. I could not finish the article. I thought that I need more thinking and time for it. I went to the bar My Way. I realized that there was a new bartender but it was just she changed her hair, getting a perm. I knew her. Errol gave me a beer. I did not feel good so I returned home earler than normal. I cooked beef steak and had leftover cream spagheeti without heating up for dinner. I went to bed around 9:30 pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.