Leaving Home
It was the last day staying in Hiroshima at my parents’ house. In the morning, I went to Sukiya for the first time since I came back to Japan. It was a plentiful and nice breakfast. When I came back home, I felt like I was about to poop myself. I hurried to go back home and dive into the rest room. I cleaned up my rooms. I went to Hono-yu, a public bath. I thought about various things. The three months flew by like the wind. My mom cooked dinner, then we had dinner at 5pm. I did not drink any alcohol. I left home just after 6pm. My mom’s and my eyes welled up with tears when we said good bye. Parting is always tinged with sadness; however, what am I doing? I took a train and bus and then reached an express bus station, Koiki-koen-mae Station. The departure time was 9pm but I arrived at around 7pm. I had to kill time. I got the bus without issues. I fell asleep around midnight, maybe. In the first place, inside the express bus was too shaking and noisy, so I could not sleep well.
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- Leaving Home It was the last day staying in Hiroshima, my parents' house. In the morning, I went to Sukiya for the first time since I came back to Japan. It was plenty and nice breakfast. When I came back home, I felt like I was about to poop myself. I hurried up to go back home and dive in the rest room. I cleaned up my rooms. I went to Hono-yu, a public bath. I thought various things. The three months flew by like the wind. My mom cooked dinner then we had dinner at 5pm. I did not drink any alcohols. I left home just after 6pm. My mom and my eyes welled up with tears when we said good bye. Parting is always tinged with sadness however; what am I doing? I took a train and bus and then reached an express bus station, Koiki-koen-mae Station. The departure time was 9pm but I arrived around 7pm. I had to kill time. I got the bus without troublesome. I fell asleep around midnight, maybe. In the first place, inside the express bus was too shaking and noisy so I could not sleep well.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.