Clear Up The Room
*Before correction
I clear up my room because I will go back to Japan for several months. I found a lot of things that I completely forgot when and where I got. I am going to start my new life style. It must be a better life for me. In the evening, I went to the bar My Way as usual. This is my daily routine. My friend, Ruud treated me a beer so I also bought a beer to him. It is a good communication. He was busy to talk with other customers. The bar was noisy than normal situation. After I came back home, I had grilled white fish, beef steak, and veggies for dinner. I fell asleep around 10pm.
The original text before the correction
- Clear Up The Room I clear up my room because I will go back to Japan for several months. I found a lot of things that I completely forgot when and where I got. I am going to start my new life style. It must be a better life for me. In the evening, I went to the bar My Way as usual. This is my daily routine. My friend, Ruud treated me a beer so I also bought a beer to him. It is a good communication. He was busy to talk with other customers. The bar was noisy than normal situation. After I came back home, I had grilled white fish, beef steak, and veggies for dinner. I fell asleep around 10pm.
Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.
