
Mingling at the Bar
I worked until 4pm. I visited the bar My Way with Eri. There were few customers. We talked an English man and his wife. They used to live in Japan. I was quite drunk and then I treated drink for six people who were there at the right time. I smoked a cigarette for the first time in over 10 years. It was good but now, I regret smoking it a bit. I will never smoke again! The bill was 46.5EUR. I spent too much money. We stopped by an Italian takeaway shop. We bought 10EUR worth of portion. It was not so good for me. I don’t remember what time I fell asleep but it might have been around 10pm.
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- Mingling at the Bar I worked until 4pm. I visited the bar My Way with Eri. There were few customers. We talked English Man and his wife. They used to live in Japan. I was quite drunk and then I treated drink for six people who there at the right time. I smoked a cigarette for the first time in over 10 years. It was good but now, I regret to smoke it a bit. I never smoke again! The bill was 46.5EUR. I spent money too much. We stopped an Italian takeaway shop. We bought 10EUR worth of portion. It was not so good for me. I don't remember what time I fell asleep but it might be around 10pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.