
Going To a Museum
We were going to leave our house at 10:30am but Jan asked us to postpone the leaving time. We left at 1:30pm. It was a deeply misty and rainy or snowy day. We visited a small museum called Kranenburgh. I love Jeroen Henneman’s art works. After that, we walked in a market then visited a historical cafe. I ordered hot milk but it came as a cold drink. We told when Eri will go back to Japan. It will be the end of this month. She has tried to find a job in the Netherlands but I think it would not be possible even though she doesn’t have a working visa. I am frustrated thinking about her unclear attitude. I had cheese, chips, and mixed veggies soup for dinner. I fell asleep before 10pm.
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- Going To a Museum We were going to leave our house at 10:30am but Jan asked us to delay the leaving time. We left at 1:30pm. It was a deep mist and rainy or snowy day. We visited a small museum called Kranenburgh. I love Jeroen Henneman's art works. After that, we walked a market then visited a historical cafe. I ordered hot milk but it came as a cold. We shared when Eri will go back to Japan. It will be the end of this month. She has tried to find a job in the Netherlands but I think it would not possible even though she doesn't have working visa. I am frustrated that thinking about her unclear attitude. I had cheese, chips, and mixed vegfies soup for dinner. I fell asleep before 10pm.

Contemporary artist based in the Netherlands. I’ve learned at an Art College and Culinary Institute. I attempt to connect ART and FOOD.